Evaluation - Directors Commentary

BULLET STORM - Final Piece

(With subtle differences from pre-final draft)

Pre-Final Draft

Another draft

this is another edit that was considered, however we want to get rid of the whole black screen flashing idea because we felt it looked a bit to much like a music video.

Intro - Edited - Idea

This is the inro to our piece. It shows the different ideas we had when we were editing it. We have chosen not to try this idea because the bits when the screen flashed to black, we found that it looked more like a music video as aposed to an action short.

The storyboard that goes with script idea 1 - Final Idea

Short chase. Mafia 1 chasing Main character Interrogates
Main character. the mafia member.
Main character executes Other members of the mafia the mafia member show up and begin pursuit.
(Curb stomp)
They run into a forrest They steal the kids' bikes
ans see some bikes and the chase begins

















Main character executes Other members of the mafia
the mafia member show up and begin pursuit
(Curb stomp)

They run into a forrest They steal the kids' bikes
ans see some bikes and the chase begins.

A series of dangerous jumps The mafia member catches the
and fast pace cycling takes character on the straight and
place as they are chasing chucks a knife that hits the
main character in the shoulderwounding him.

After this they gather round him and knock him out
"we want you alive"

Screenshot of the editing process for the beggining

Here, we are using Sony Vegas to crop down the parts we actually want and cut out the excess.

Then we will put them in order. Effects and sound tracks will be added later.

Final Instituiton intro - High-Five Studios

The logos were designed by me and Dom. Lewis then used the logos and animated them

Idea for logo: Instituion - HighFive Studios

Idea for logo: Institution - TopHat Productions

We chose the logo to be a top hat because it related to the institution name.
I edited the font on top of the hat and Dom and Lewis gave ideas and suggestions to what it could look like. So we all contributed to this.